At this point, my first draft of the last formal assignment in this course “Formal Assignment #3: Research Project” is complete. I have found multiple sources and quotes that provide the reader with relevant and trustworthy research to backup my claim. I am awaiting a response from my professor for corrections and tips on revising my draft and handing in my second draft. I have also revised my preface as we were told so in the class. I finished the paper with over one thousand words, three quotes, linking to three previous blog posts, and comparing to the films we watched. All this gives the reader a strong believe that the author has done his research and the persuasion will be much more effective. It will also give me the thought of what to write about and filling my first draft.
In this paper, I did not hold back on my first draft like I always do. I usually tend to hold on to my thoughts and words in my first draft to try and keep it as clean as possible. However, in this draft I did otherwise. It helped a lot and I was able to get most of the thoughts on the paper. After that I just read over it and cleaned it up. As soon as I get my corrected draft back, I will be able to organize it. Finishing off my paper, I stated "In conclusion, social media does influence toxic behaviors in our teenage boys by connecting them with toxic examples through social media. However, eliminating teenage boys from consuming toxic information off social media is not impossible, although it does require change from the parents. American teenage parents need to change the way of raising their teenage boys and adapt to new ways of raising them in this new world, the social media world." I believe this conclusion leaves my readers, who are American parents of teenage boys, wondering how they should change their interactions and teachings with their kids to prevent toxic behaviors that can be easily taught by bad role models on social media. This will complete my point as I have convinced or persuaded the reader to change and adapt to the new way of raising American teenage boys.
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AuthorMustafa Al-Qaraghuli “Start writing, no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on.”
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